16th April
Over the Easter holidays, our film opening sequence was viewed and commented on by our teachers. They gave us crucial feedback which we will use to complete our opening sequence in order to improve it.
Feedback
- take out the first title
- take out the dissolve walking shot to make it just one shot
- cut the sitting on a bench shot
- edit the sound because the timing is out of sync slightly on some of the sound motifs
- overall the atmosphere is very creepy
As well as this, all three of us are currently writing our evaluations.
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