Strengths:
- 3D titles
- Soundtrack
- Special effects
- Mise-en-scene at the beginning of the opening
- Conventional locations
- Use of props
Weaknesses:
- Over use of sound motif
- Elements of narrative unclear
- Too little action
Improvements:
- More action
- Better plot ideas
- Less repetitive sound
- More inventive camera shots
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ReplyDeleteIm pleased with the final cut :)
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